I don't even know how you would critique something this beautiful~ I think if I had to pick out something, it'd be that the chain looks a little thick compared to how delicate the rest of it is, but even then, the pendant may need a strong chain for support. And it's likely half this size irl, so... Anyway, I really love it.
Actually, the thickness of the chain is to offset the balance of the delicate pieces. That and to ensure said delicate pieces do not detach and become one with a floor somewhere lol. Thank you so much for your thoughtful and wonderful comment! I need more comments like this n.n